User talk:TopDread/Onyx

Criticism Requested
I would like to make any of the characters I wrote the best they can be, so I would like feedback. If any user thinks any aspect of the character should be changed, then write what should be changed on the character's discussion page. If there is anything any user wants to criticize, then feel free to criticize it on the character's discussion page. Also, if there are any grammatical errors write this on the discussion page. If there are any paragraphs which any user feels should be broken up, combined or removed, then write what should be changed on the character's discussion page. If there are any spelling errors, then fix them after checking with a dictionary first. Lastly, don't write what you like about the characters; only write about what you dislike. User:TopDread 12:00 5 Feb 2006 (PST)

It said this character was a dark troll. Hope you don't mind that I changed the icon now that we have one :)  Mr.X8  Talk Contribs  00:27, 18 November 2007 (UTC)